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Выполнила: ученица 9а класса
Руководитель: учитель английского языка
Какенова Муслима Амандыковна
“ Keeping animals in zoos .”
Some people believe zoos, where wild animals are kept in a man-made environment, should no longer exist in the twenty century. What is your opinion about this? What are the main advantages and disadvantages of this?
There is no doubt that subject of zoos creates a lot of debate. There are those who argue that wild animals must kept in imprisonment, whereas others believe that zoos useless in our modern world of the twenty first century. While some people believe that we can protect and save animals are undeniable, my own view is that wild animals must live in their natural habit not in a fabricated environment.
One clear advantage of zoos is that people keep wild animals in zoos just to save them from merciless killing. Zoo workers feed them; inhabitants are treated from different diseases. We can save rare animals.
Another positive aspect of zoo is that it may be used for entertainment. People, especially children, come to zoo to see animals they haven`t met in their usual life. They introduce with different types of animals from all over the world in real not by the pictures. They get positive emotions. In addition (to this) is a financial issue. Most of us can make money creating such environment as zoo.
On the other hand, there are many arguments against unnatural conditions for wild animals. Firstly, many inhabitants suffer from people and various diseases. Sometimes there are unfair zoo workers whom treat animals badly. Some visitors can cause problems for them because of their freak or carelessness. Another drawback is that most of the people suffer from wild animals. It is very dangerous to work with wild animals because they may harm people. However, perhaps the most serious negative aspect of zoos is that animals live in an unnatural condition. It would be better if wild animals hunt, satisfy their brute.
In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages to keeping animals in zoos. Personally, though, I believe that people find the way to protect and save wild animals. As we live in the twenty first century of innovations of technologies, we should create something new for such type of animals not keeping them in imprisonment.
Does the writer mention your arguments for/against zoos from Exercise 1? — Писатель упоминает свои аргументы за / против зоопарков из упражнения 1?
Is the writer generally for or against zoos? Do you find his/her essay convincing? — Писатель в целом или против зоопарков? Считаете ли вы его / ее эссе убедительным?
Do you find his/her essay convincing? — Считаете ли вы его / ее эссе убедительным?
Zoos Are Last Chance For Siberian Tiger — Зоопарки Последний шанс для сибирского тигра
Zoos still have a useful function in the modern world. Do you agree? — Зоопарки до сих пор выполняют полезную функцию в современном мире. Вы согласны?
Although the function of zoos has changed little during the last 250 years, zoos are very controversial today. Many people think they are cruel and have no place in the modem world. It is my own opinion that zoos, although not perfect, do have a useful function.
Хотя функция зоопарков немного изменилась за последние 250 лет, зоопарки очень спорные сегодня. Многие люди думают, что они жестоки и не имеют никакого места в современном мире. Это мое собственное мнение, что зоопарки, хотя и не идеальны, имеют полезную функцию.
First of all, zoos are places of education. Zoos can help children to appreciate nature. Furthermore, research into animal behaviour is done in zoos and has increased our knowledge of zoology, genetics and even psychology. Above all, zoos can protect the future of many species of animal. Many species today are in danger of extinction and, thanks to breeding in zoos, many animals have a chance of survival. Indeed there are some animals which now only exist in zoos.
Прежде всего, зоопарки являются местами образования. Зоопарки могут помочь детям ценить природу. Кроме того, исследования в области поведения животных, осуществляемые в зоопарках, расширили наши знания зоологии, генетики и даже психологии. Прежде всего, зоопарки могут защитить будущее многих видов животных. Многие виды сегодня находятся под угрозой исчезновения, и, благодаря разведению в зоопарках, у многих животных есть шанс на выживание. На самом деле есть некоторые животные, которые в настоящее время существуют только в зоопарках.
Opponents of zoos say that they are cruel. First of all, they argue, zoos cannot recreate the environment in which animals live and, because of this, animals are bored and depressed. Secondly, animals have frequent contact with human visitors, which can be stressful. However, in my opinion, most zoos have improved recently. It is now quite rare to see animals in cages and most zoos try hard to recreate the environments in which different animals live.
Противники зоопарков говорят, что они жестоки. Во-первых, они утверждают, зоопарки не могут воссоздать обстановку, в которой животные живут и, из-за этого, животные скучают и являются подавленными. Во-вторых, животные имеют частый контакт с человеческими посетителями, которые могут быть напряженными. Тем не менее, на мой взгляд, большинство зоопарков улучшились в последнее время. Сейчас довольно редко можно увидеть животных в клетках и большинство зоопарков стараются воссоздать условия, в которых разные животные живут.
In conclusion, although zoos are not a perfect environment for animals, I believe that they have more advantages than disadvantages. In an ideal world, zoos would not be necessary. But as long as man hunts animals for profit and destroys their environments, zoos are essential.
В заключение, хотя зоопарки не являются идеальной средой для животных, я считаю, что они имеют больше преимуществ, чем недостатков. В идеальном мире, в зоопарках не было бы необходимости. Но до тех пор, пока человек охотится на животных с целью получения прибыли и разрушает их среду, зоопарки имеют важное значение.
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The problem of keeping animals in zoos has recently been a popular topic for discussion. While some people believe that zoos are useless and dangerous for wildlife, others believe that zoos are very useful and educational.
In my view, some animals should be taken from their natural surrounding and put into zoos. There are several reasons to support my opinion. First of all, zoos help save endangered species.
The animals are protected from poaching and severe climatic conditions. Apart from that, animals do not die from hanger because they always have enough food in zoos. Specialists monitor the proper nutrition of animals, for their vitamin balance, for females during pregnancy and feeding. Furthermore, zoos are good for entertainment and education. People can come to zoos and see rare species of animals that do not live in their country or
Or children living in the city can see and touch the pets that usually live on a farm such as cows, sheep, goats, chickens,
turkey, ducks, horses, rabbits.
However, opponents of this view say that animals are stressed and exhausted in zoos. Often in large animals such as a lion or bear very small cells, their nutrition is not always sufficient, frequent travel from place to place adversely affects the health of animals. They also argue that animals live in poor conditions. Dirty cages and animal`s feeders can become a breeding ground for disease-causing bacteria, which in turn can damage animal health in zoos.
It is hard to agree with their opinion because veterinarians treat animals and constantly monitor their health. They periodically make them vaccinations, collect tests, add the necessary vitamins. Besides, now the authorities have allocate a lot of money to zoos. Owners of zoos can expand their area to arrange large waltzes for animals, so they are not crowded into small cells. There ate large cages in zoos now where the animals feel comfortable.
As already stated, I am convinced that some animals should live in zoos. After all, I wanted to say that people should gently treat the wildlife.
К1 (решение коммуникативной задачи) – 1 балл
Текст насчитывает 342 слова, что значительно превышает разрешённый объём сочинения. По этой причине проверке подлежит лишь фрагмент до слов It is hard to agree with their включительно. В результате ряд аспектов темы остаётся формально нераскрытым.
К2 (организация текста) – 1 балл
В сочинении прослеживается чёткая логика, однако абзацное членение вызывает большие вопросы. Так, в приведённом ниже фрагменте автор, очевидно, допустил технические ошибки при расстановке пробелов, следствием чего стала разорванность и малая смысловая связность текста.
in their country orOr children living in the city can see and touch the pets that usually live on a farm such as cows, sheep, goats, chickens,
turkey, ducks, horses, rabbits.
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1) has recently been – has recently become [Следует сказать, что данная тема не была предметом обсуждения ( been ), а стала им (become)];
2) natural surrounding – natural habitat [Устоявшееся наименование естественной среды обитания животного – natural habitat];
3) can see and touch the pets – can see and touch animals [Далеко не все из перечисленных далее животных могут быть домашними питомцами];
4) very small cells – very small cages [Слово cell в данном случае не подходит, поскольку обозначает клетки живого организма, а не те, в которых содержат животных].
К4 (грамматика) – 2 балла
1) Animals should be keeping in zoos – Animals should be kept in zoos [Грубая ошибка в самом названии текста – неверно образована форма страдательного залога];
2) Specialists monitor the proper nutrition of animals, for their vitamin balance, for females during pregnancy and feeding [Смысл предложения улавливается, но грамматическое оформление некорректно. Можно перефразировать таким образом: Specialists monitor the proper nutrition of animals, provide vitamin balance in their diet and take care of females during pregnancy and feeding];
3) turkey – turkeys [Существительное не поставлено во множественное число];
К5 (орфография и пунктуация) – 2 балла
hanger – hunger [В слове допущена меняющая его смысл опечатка].
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